The rhymes are well done, shockedquartz, and I love rhymes, but, like Grant, I find many writes become slave to the rhyme. The longer the piece, the more difficult to sustain the rhyme …

You have some good rhymes, a feeling tone that I can relate with in this poem. The "grittiness" of life, a certain edge, understanding the darkness. I like your poem, glad you're sharing these …

How to get more Feedback! So you have posted a poem, song or short story and want some feedback but aren’t getting any comments. We have all be there and it can be frustrating, I …